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From: Dorothy H Fancher
Date: 07 Sep 1999
Time: 09:16:43
Remote Name: 198.108.229.120
Hi Rachel! Your response about your favorite type of music is quite good. You had a clear opening statement, which provided the main idea. You had some detail as to why you like alternative music. Your closure wasn't as good as the rest of the paragraph, but it suffices. I also like alternative rock because it doesn't have that thump...thump of hard rock. My brother-in-law is an alterative rocker and has a few CD's out. He plays the circuit in the Detroit area. I think his band's name is SPATZ. Ever hear of them?