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From: Dorothy H Fancher
Date: 07 Sep 1999
Time: 09:28:05
Remote Name: 198.108.229.120
Boy, Patrick, we really need to work on your typing skills. Just doing these discussion forums every week might help some. In response to your discussion on your favorite type of music, you need to tell why you like the music or artist. Without the details to explain or clarify the main idea, the reader has difficulty understanding the point. For your next submission, try to give at least three reasons for your topic.